We all love Beginning Time in any thing we do. If you've ever quit smoking, you'll smile and agree: the opening rush is as good as it get: that fabulous sense of adventure, the positive kick of commitment...the sure and certain knowledge that this, Yeah Baby, this is IT! And if you haven't quit the evil weed, you've quit or started something else and felt the same sensation. You sure as hell have felt it if you've ever started a book.
But somewhere in Beginning Time,the sense of purity deserts us. The great opening pages that came at our call...the almighty thrill of smoke-free air that made it a snap to swear Never again...We forget these things and look in horror at the looming outline of a great beast coming our way soon: the monstrous stretch of Middle Time. Christ, Beginning Time was 50-75 pages...and now we're talking, like, maybe 200? We see the mountains of creative earth that we must move and feel the exhaustion already. Just as we would if we'd quit smoking and at the heady three-month mark we realized that our one-year anny was nine more months ahead. Middle Time is where, more than ever, we need to focus on the process...and somehow learn to love the journey in each step we take. To love the daily challenges, the little victories, even the fatigue. If we don't love this part of the journey, our lovelessness will show in the final product: in lack of attention to detail, loss of rhythm, missing zing.
End Time is glorious, but the temptation is enormous to hurry the process and finish the book, reach the one year anny, cross whatever finish line. It's much shorter than Middle Time and that is sweet. Plus End Time is attended by invigorating feelings of pride, accomplishment and joy. But the best of it can still be lost if we let ourselves be rushed. End Time, after all, brings us to a set of new beginnings: the second draft...and the third...and the fourth...each of which have their three stages.
Let's enjoy each phase as best we can. Our work will be the better for it if we treat every step of the journey with all due respect.
A New Life in Seattle
Monday, December 31, 2012
Saturday, December 29, 2012
Meet My New Pal, Pressure
I ran into the first major hurdle since starting work two months ago on the third Boss MacTavin novel. As you may recall, this is the first time I've drafted a book start to finish without stopping to rewrite every batch of fifty pages. I was going great guns and grooving on the difference when I came to a critical juncture. Following the outline, I'I faced a heap of exposition that needed to be done. I froze. I couldn't kill the action, but I had to take care of this business.
In one form or another, I'm sure you've all faced the same thing. Suddenly, faced with your Wall, you feel your confidence start to collapse...
I write by hand. I always have. That day though, out of nowhere, an idea occurred to me: What if I changed the way that I wrote by hand? What if I wrote more slowly, applying a little more pressure, getting into the feel of the tip of the pencil burrowing into the Moleskine? I did. The pressure forced me to concentrate on every word, savoring the language. And at one point I paused to note that if I wrote only 6 words a minute, I'd meet my quota of 500 words in a little over an hour. No need to hurry or worry. None at all. I ended up writing 1200 words and getting well over the hurdle. And, for now at least, I keep on working at the same more relaxed speed.
New foot work, new hand work, whatever it takes to get our books on paper, eh?
Wednesday, December 26, 2012
Vegan Fu Report #1: Viva, San Francisco Kid!
Eden's doors aren't locked but licked by repeated failures on two fronts: first, memory...second, imagination. We forget how good we had it once. Then, tragically, we can't imagine ever having it that good again.
Way back when, a younger Reb crossed the country with $300 and dreams of finding happiness in a fabled city: San Francisco. Within a year, I'd stopped drinking, begun working out, adapted an all-natural diet...and maybe not so coincidentally, started on what would become my first book, THE SUITING. I grew thin, ripped and passionately committed to becoming The Francisco Kid.
I could tell you some stories of heartbreak and loss that led to the loss of that Eden. But I'd rather focus now on getting back again inside those locked and pearly gates. So let's wrap the past up with a neat little bow: I married unwisely, my wife despised my writing and natural diet, we fought and fought, the fights grew worse, I left her and headed south--where, in the grips of a bloody divorce, the pressure of a new job, the grief over my father's death--I started smoking again after 12 years. I stayed off booze, I'm pleased to say, but I was back on junk food and smoking like a chimney...and so began the great battle to kick tobacco once again while my blood sugar spiked and yo-yoed.
Enough. No more excuses. It is time now get back to Eden. I've been back off tobacco for 2-1/2 years. Off caffeine and red meat for as many. So I've got a head start on my journey and the battle I now face against some mortal enemies: sugar, fructose, the wrong carbs and their gang of wicked cronies.
Battle plan: from now until New Year's, I plan to continue painting myself into the corner I want: increasing the daily amount of fruits and salads I consume...progressively eliminating dairy and chicken--the last meat I eat...decreasing the number of my daily decafs--and eliminating cream and the sweetened flavors Starbucks adds...
Special strategies: I work third shifts, 7 nights on, 7 days off. This plays havoc with my energy, causing cravings for sugary snacks to keep me in the zone. I'll need to start packing alternative snacks: especially low-calorie treats like shredded carrots and sliced apples,
Power packing: I'll need to set out daily armed with both physical and spiritual boosts: veggie wraps, juices, distilled water, fruits...Principles I've learned are true: Cravings create cravings--so cultivate great cravings...Baby foods make baby thoughts--so eat like an adult to think like a man...Lose the ounces, not the pounds--and find the journey in the steps, not the destination...
Goal: by following an all-natural diet, about 80% raw...and by eliminating entirely all meat, sugar and dairy...to return to that lost Eden. The great joy in my heart when the Mexican bus driver sang: 'Sahn Furahn-seeeeees-cooooo!' and I saw the fabled skyline and knew my life's greatest adventure was just about to begin.
Well, here I am in Charlotte, where I rather wish I weren't. But, God, I hear that driver sing. And, oh, I know it's time again to crash the gates of Eden. The S. F. Kid's come home again.
This is my report.
Way back when, a younger Reb crossed the country with $300 and dreams of finding happiness in a fabled city: San Francisco. Within a year, I'd stopped drinking, begun working out, adapted an all-natural diet...and maybe not so coincidentally, started on what would become my first book, THE SUITING. I grew thin, ripped and passionately committed to becoming The Francisco Kid.
I could tell you some stories of heartbreak and loss that led to the loss of that Eden. But I'd rather focus now on getting back again inside those locked and pearly gates. So let's wrap the past up with a neat little bow: I married unwisely, my wife despised my writing and natural diet, we fought and fought, the fights grew worse, I left her and headed south--where, in the grips of a bloody divorce, the pressure of a new job, the grief over my father's death--I started smoking again after 12 years. I stayed off booze, I'm pleased to say, but I was back on junk food and smoking like a chimney...and so began the great battle to kick tobacco once again while my blood sugar spiked and yo-yoed.
Enough. No more excuses. It is time now get back to Eden. I've been back off tobacco for 2-1/2 years. Off caffeine and red meat for as many. So I've got a head start on my journey and the battle I now face against some mortal enemies: sugar, fructose, the wrong carbs and their gang of wicked cronies.
Battle plan: from now until New Year's, I plan to continue painting myself into the corner I want: increasing the daily amount of fruits and salads I consume...progressively eliminating dairy and chicken--the last meat I eat...decreasing the number of my daily decafs--and eliminating cream and the sweetened flavors Starbucks adds...
Special strategies: I work third shifts, 7 nights on, 7 days off. This plays havoc with my energy, causing cravings for sugary snacks to keep me in the zone. I'll need to start packing alternative snacks: especially low-calorie treats like shredded carrots and sliced apples,
Power packing: I'll need to set out daily armed with both physical and spiritual boosts: veggie wraps, juices, distilled water, fruits...Principles I've learned are true: Cravings create cravings--so cultivate great cravings...Baby foods make baby thoughts--so eat like an adult to think like a man...Lose the ounces, not the pounds--and find the journey in the steps, not the destination...
Goal: by following an all-natural diet, about 80% raw...and by eliminating entirely all meat, sugar and dairy...to return to that lost Eden. The great joy in my heart when the Mexican bus driver sang: 'Sahn Furahn-seeeeees-cooooo!' and I saw the fabled skyline and knew my life's greatest adventure was just about to begin.
Well, here I am in Charlotte, where I rather wish I weren't. But, God, I hear that driver sing. And, oh, I know it's time again to crash the gates of Eden. The S. F. Kid's come home again.
This is my report.
Thursday, December 20, 2012
The Great Freebie Jubilee: 12 free books
For two days, 12/21-12/22 you can brighten your Kindles with 12 free ebooks by 10 rising stars. There's something here for everyone...including two holiday thrillers by, you guessed it, Reb MacRath.
Check it out at:
http://tinyurl.com/ccb25g9
Check it out at:
http://tinyurl.com/ccb25g9
Wednesday, December 19, 2012
Delay by Sabotage
The Vegan Fu Report has been delayed by the slow death of my laptop, caused by the Meat and Dairy Lobbies' combined cowardly attempts to silence me. :)
But never try to cow a man who's given up on cow meat, as well as chickens, hogs and fish. The first report--Viva , San Francisco Kid--will arrive next week. All natural, organic and written by hand.
But never try to cow a man who's given up on cow meat, as well as chickens, hogs and fish. The first report--Viva , San Francisco Kid--will arrive next week. All natural, organic and written by hand.
Saturday, December 15, 2012
Vegan Fu Report Update
The first weekly report has been delayed one day because of a wonderful stroke of good luck: I was asked by my friend Kirkus MacGowan to participate in a two-day team giveaway 12/21-12/22. I jumped at the chance and am glad that I did because my progress on the learning curve has taken a real quantum leap. The amount of work that goes into a properly staged event is staggering, I needed two entire days simply to list my books with a slew of sites promoting giveaway events. For most, I needed to approach each site three times--once for each book I'm including. And the work's barely begun.
I'll write about this at greater length after the event, when I can compare download results with my previous solo efforts.
For now, look for the first Vegan Fu Report Sunday night!
I'll write about this at greater length after the event, when I can compare download results with my previous solo efforts.
For now, look for the first Vegan Fu Report Sunday night!
Friday, December 7, 2012
Coming December 15: The Raw Truth and Writing
A periodic chronicle of one strayed man's attempt to regain his lost Salad Days, his first stay in California as The San Francisco Kid: the juice and raw food loving health nut who'd put booze and tobacco behind him, along with meat and flour and sugar...
How many times I've strayed since then! Though I stopped drinking completely, I've yo-yo'ed on pretty much everything else. In my year now without a smoke, and thirty years off alcohol, I set out now as a serious man to regain the vim and vigor of The S. F. Kid.
But you come here for news about writing, you say. Ah, but what could be more about writing than the fuel I feed both my body and brain? What could be more about writing than earning more time and health to compose?
I'll keep my reports short and lively. I'll be totally upfront and candid. Drop by on December 15 to witness my poignant, heartbreaking goodbye--and that's goodbye forever--to Dove Chocolate, Ben & Jerry's ice cream, Red Baron's pizza and the whole rest of the gang. Forget Rhett and Scarlet. You'll hear the cellos hit low G and strings take wing.
Till then.
How many times I've strayed since then! Though I stopped drinking completely, I've yo-yo'ed on pretty much everything else. In my year now without a smoke, and thirty years off alcohol, I set out now as a serious man to regain the vim and vigor of The S. F. Kid.
But you come here for news about writing, you say. Ah, but what could be more about writing than the fuel I feed both my body and brain? What could be more about writing than earning more time and health to compose?
I'll keep my reports short and lively. I'll be totally upfront and candid. Drop by on December 15 to witness my poignant, heartbreaking goodbye--and that's goodbye forever--to Dove Chocolate, Ben & Jerry's ice cream, Red Baron's pizza and the whole rest of the gang. Forget Rhett and Scarlet. You'll hear the cellos hit low G and strings take wing.
Till then.
Thursday, December 6, 2012
One-month Report on Marathon First-Drafting
By setting, and sticking to, a minimum goal of 500 words daily, I've nearly drafted the first third of the new Boss MacTavin novel since November 5. Generally, I've managed 700 words, occasionally 800 or 900. From now on detailed outlines are the way I plan to fly because I enjoy the security...and the rush that always follows deviating from the plan.
Next challenge: starting the clerical duties--typing what I've written on a schedule that I must determine. Wren Doloro has suggested Moleskine's 'EverNote' notebook, which transmits written text into digital form. I'll use that for the next book! Now, without sacrificing speed, I must begin the typing--or face a massi ve typing task three months down the road.
Motivational tactic: regard the weekly typing as a substitute for things I liked about the old cyclical method: write 50-75 pages...stop...put it through three drafts...then carry on again. As I type I can refresh my memory on key character and plot points...determine if the pacing is still on point...etc.
What do I like best about Marathon First-Drafting? I'm high on the sense of momentum. I love the creative adventure, undiluted by clerical drudgery. Each page is a fresh discovery.
And what's the greatest challenge, for me? Going with it in the spirit of making the world's greatest mudpie--something that needs worlds of work but is a living blast to bake. Shaking that ancient sense of right and wrong, that old fear of 'mistakes'.
I'm having the time of my life. :)
Next challenge: starting the clerical duties--typing what I've written on a schedule that I must determine. Wren Doloro has suggested Moleskine's 'EverNote' notebook, which transmits written text into digital form. I'll use that for the next book! Now, without sacrificing speed, I must begin the typing--or face a massi ve typing task three months down the road.
Motivational tactic: regard the weekly typing as a substitute for things I liked about the old cyclical method: write 50-75 pages...stop...put it through three drafts...then carry on again. As I type I can refresh my memory on key character and plot points...determine if the pacing is still on point...etc.
What do I like best about Marathon First-Drafting? I'm high on the sense of momentum. I love the creative adventure, undiluted by clerical drudgery. Each page is a fresh discovery.
And what's the greatest challenge, for me? Going with it in the spirit of making the world's greatest mudpie--something that needs worlds of work but is a living blast to bake. Shaking that ancient sense of right and wrong, that old fear of 'mistakes'.
I'm having the time of my life. :)
Sunday, December 2, 2012
How 1 and 2 Equals One
SOUTHERN SCOTCH and THE ALCATRAZ CORRECTION are both Boss MacTavin novels...but they're very different books in terms of tone, style and character. For readers who've downloaded both, it may be useful to know a few things.
SOUTHERN SCOTCH is a genesis story, subtitled "The Bloody Rise of Boss MacTavin". Though Boss bears next to no resemblance to James Bond, I had in mind a three-book arc similar to what Daniel Craig seemed to have planned with Casino Royale." When Pete McGregor, a flamed-out Scottish athlete, ends up in the wrong place in Atlanta one night, he's half-blinded and beaten terribly. Five years later, he comes back with a new name and a new look, on the trail of the bastards who beat him. Boss has grown in wealth and power, but his spirit is still crude--largely shaped by his passion for Mickey Spillane and his towering thirst for revenge. This first tale is narrated by Dodge Cunningham, a young rogue who'd indirectly helped cause the beating that night. Through other eyes, I believe, we can better see the change in Boss as the trail leads him to the heart of the Atlanta porn trade. It's a wild, bloody ride but at the end Boss has changed and is prepared for higher ground.
THE ALCATRAZ CORRECTION takes place three years later. Boss is partly based in San Francisco and he's doing quite nicely in business and love. Though he still has his quirks and edge, and though he can be brutal, he's developed a a strong code and a passion for proper Corrections. Boss tells the story this time. I know readers will warm to the difference.
And for those who miss the Dodge Charger that only seemed to be 'talking' in SS, there's a Hertz in TAC that's anything but 'just' a Hertz.
SOUTHERN SCOTCH is a genesis story, subtitled "The Bloody Rise of Boss MacTavin". Though Boss bears next to no resemblance to James Bond, I had in mind a three-book arc similar to what Daniel Craig seemed to have planned with Casino Royale." When Pete McGregor, a flamed-out Scottish athlete, ends up in the wrong place in Atlanta one night, he's half-blinded and beaten terribly. Five years later, he comes back with a new name and a new look, on the trail of the bastards who beat him. Boss has grown in wealth and power, but his spirit is still crude--largely shaped by his passion for Mickey Spillane and his towering thirst for revenge. This first tale is narrated by Dodge Cunningham, a young rogue who'd indirectly helped cause the beating that night. Through other eyes, I believe, we can better see the change in Boss as the trail leads him to the heart of the Atlanta porn trade. It's a wild, bloody ride but at the end Boss has changed and is prepared for higher ground.
THE ALCATRAZ CORRECTION takes place three years later. Boss is partly based in San Francisco and he's doing quite nicely in business and love. Though he still has his quirks and edge, and though he can be brutal, he's developed a a strong code and a passion for proper Corrections. Boss tells the story this time. I know readers will warm to the difference.
And for those who miss the Dodge Charger that only seemed to be 'talking' in SS, there's a Hertz in TAC that's anything but 'just' a Hertz.
Thursday, November 29, 2012
I can scarcely excite my containment!
The magic days are almost here: four free books for two full days:
Friday 11/30 through Saturday 12/1
The four titles and links appear on the right side of this blog. I've devoted my life to my writing and I celebrate this chance to share what I've learned with you.
Four tales of mystery, romance and suspense...delivered with style and passion and wit.
Welcome to MacRathWorld. You won't regret your visit. Cheers!
Reb
Friday 11/30 through Saturday 12/1
The four titles and links appear on the right side of this blog. I've devoted my life to my writing and I celebrate this chance to share what I've learned with you.
Four tales of mystery, romance and suspense...delivered with style and passion and wit.
Welcome to MacRathWorld. You won't regret your visit. Cheers!
Reb
Wednesday, November 28, 2012
MACRATHWORLD GOES TOTALLY FREE
Yes, for two days my four ebooks will be reduced to a Yule-perfect price:
Dates: 11/30-12/1. All book links appear on the right, under "MacRathWorld Rides on Kindle".
Download...Sample...Then enjoy, knowing that you're in good hands.
Dates: 11/30-12/1. All book links appear on the right, under "MacRathWorld Rides on Kindle".
Download...Sample...Then enjoy, knowing that you're in good hands.
Friday, November 23, 2012
Do that sexy thang, First Draft!
An older dog learns a new trick:
I've always favored the cyclical approach: composing a novel in sections and stopping to do a few drafts of each part. And don't let anyone tell you there aren't advantages to this. There are. The biggest two are that the writer's confidence is boosted, as is his/her memory of particulars/placement of clues, etc. Plus, of course, it's far easier to do the end-drafts than it is to start revising a novel of 300 pages or more.
But to survive the new ebook jungle, I needed to learn some new footwork if I were to put on some speed. Two to five years between books wouldn't do.
One month into the new novel, I'm able to say this: There's a greater sense of momentum and thrust in just getting the tale on the page, not stopping to polish every other month. I enjoy the fearless pleasure of this mudpie-making phase--playing, taking chances, discovering as I go. And I've learned to steel my mind against thoughts of the rewriting chores I will face.
Four months to get it all down on paper. Four to five months to revise. Then three months to plot and outline the following year's work. I'm stoked!
Memo to myself, though: Be sure to type up the handwritten pages at least every other week to avoid a month of typing at the end of the first draft.
I've always favored the cyclical approach: composing a novel in sections and stopping to do a few drafts of each part. And don't let anyone tell you there aren't advantages to this. There are. The biggest two are that the writer's confidence is boosted, as is his/her memory of particulars/placement of clues, etc. Plus, of course, it's far easier to do the end-drafts than it is to start revising a novel of 300 pages or more.
But to survive the new ebook jungle, I needed to learn some new footwork if I were to put on some speed. Two to five years between books wouldn't do.
One month into the new novel, I'm able to say this: There's a greater sense of momentum and thrust in just getting the tale on the page, not stopping to polish every other month. I enjoy the fearless pleasure of this mudpie-making phase--playing, taking chances, discovering as I go. And I've learned to steel my mind against thoughts of the rewriting chores I will face.
Four months to get it all down on paper. Four to five months to revise. Then three months to plot and outline the following year's work. I'm stoked!
Memo to myself, though: Be sure to type up the handwritten pages at least every other week to avoid a month of typing at the end of the first draft.
Sunday, November 18, 2012
THE BIG BRAWL: CLAUDE BOUCHARD & HENCHMEN
I had a
dream. I got to spar with four favorite ebook writers whom I've
never met:
CLAUDE
BOUCHARD (CB). You all know Claude: the charming and
amiable author of The Vigilante series. Claude, in fact, uses his
charm to conceal his deadly skill at entrapment.
RUSSELL
BLAKE (RB). You know Russell too, or think you do. Prolific
isn't the word for this man. His output is staggering. So is his
hype. I see Napoleon reborn—with the heart of a komodo dragon.
Beware!
JOHN A.
A. LOGAN (JL). You love the brilliant mind behind THE SURVIVAL
OF THOMAS FORD and STORM DAMAGE. But did you know that Logan boxed
and also served as a trainer? He'll pound all hell out of my
penchant for fun unless my wits are reinforced.
KIRKUS
MACGOWAN (KM). You know the gentle giant behind THE FALL OF BILLY
HITCHINGS and WRATH. But did you know he's almost mastered the
Karate technique 'The Black Hug'?
LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!
The stadium has filled. And refreshments have been served. Please refrain from throwing beer or carrot juice at the contestants. The Big Brawl begins in 4...3...2..Go!
ROUND
ONE
CB: You've
got so many names, Reb, I hardly know where to begin. El
Reberoo, The Rebster...You've also gone by Kelley Wilde?
RM: Don't
stop there, babe. Carry on: My other pen names include Dodge
Cunningham, Johnnie Allegro, Nick Mercurio, Cherokee Blacke...
CB: But
your birth name--
RM: Bubba,
stop right there. Or I'll tell the world you're Italian.
CB: You
watch your mouth, I was born in Quebec!
RM: But
your accent's Italian.
CB: As if
you would know! I've never even talked with you!
RM: Hey,
whose dream is this anyway?
CB: Let's
back up a second. You're not even Scottish, dude. You were born in
Buffalo.
RM: Oh,
for crissake. Next you'll be telling the world that I'm not
pint-sized either.
CB: You're
over six-feet talL, Reb!
RM: Okay,
now I'm taking the gloves off. I 'd like to remind you my Aunt
Esther said: 'From my earliest girlhood I worshiped men's feet. But
now that I'm older I've had to cut down. One foot, give or take an
inch, is all my doc allows me. Even so, I'm proud to say, there's no
rest for the wicket in my door.'
CB: WHAT'S
THAT GOT TO DO WITH ANYTHING!
RM: As
much to do as my having been born in Buffalo or anywhere. We find
our real roots through long searching. The answer's in our blood,
our bones. I'm from Edinburgh, not Buffalo.
CB: Reb,
have some Ben and Jerry's ice cream...gargle with salt water...and
you'll be fine. Maybe then I'll be able to tell if I'm talking with
Groucho Marx, Oscar Wilde or Andy Warhol.
RM:
Lunch, you say? You're paying? Swell! In that case, you can bring a
companion. Hell, bring one for yourself as well. I promise not to
tell a soul who won't swear to repeat it.
CB:
AUGHHHHHHHH!
(CB
retires to his chair, signaling he's won the round.)
ROUND
TWO
RB: Hey,
everybody, check out these amazing 5-star reviews for Jet 3, 4, 5 and
6, the four latest installments of my new action series--
RM: Russ,
please. Remember the rule? No touts or links allowed here.
RB: Rules
are meant to be broken.
RM: Not in
The Big Brawl.
RB: But I
can't engage in a battle of wits with an unarmed opponent. What else
can I do but promote my own work? You're not exactly setting the
charts on fire, kiddo.
RM: True.
RB: I
mean, just to set the record straight: You've published four novels
a lifetime ago with two major publishers. One award but crappy sales.
Now you've published four online. I publish eight in a year, at the
least. So Big Brawl is a little misleading. More like Mosquito Smackdown?
RM: Yes
and No.
RB: I get
the Yes. But how's the No?
RM: Aunt
Esther once said of her old friend Estelle: 'That woman adored
getting married. The gowns, the gifts, the bands—the gifts! But
terribly, invariably, the honeymoon always...began. Back to the salt
mines on white satin sheets.'
RB: It
would take me a lot more tequila than I'm able to afford to start to
fathom what that means.
RM: In its
own way, it celebrates nonsense. Just as you or I celebrate nonsense
if we believe for a moment that we can control our compulsions in
art. I don't believe you deliberately chose to work 20-hour days in
order to turn out a novel a month. And length of composition is no
guarantee of quality. If it were, no one would read a great quickie called ON THE ROAD. You do this because you must—you were born
to write your way. And I never chose to spend 20 years on THE
ALCATRAZ CORRECTION.
RB: You
just touted your own work!
RM: Why
not, it's my dream. If I can't cheat here, where can I?
(RB
storms back to his chair, flashing links to those reviews.)
ROUND THREE
JL: All
right, lad, you've had your fun. What are you really up to? You've
got two series going now that couldn't be more different, not only
from each other but from everything else online. On the one hand, we
have two short Christmas thrillers filled with poetry and romance.
On the other, we have the thrillers starring Boss MacTavin,
hardboiled and bloody and loaded with shocks.
RM: True,
they do seem to be miles apart. But the Xmas thrillers have their
shocks and the other books have their romance. 'Hard-won' happy
endings are common to them all. There's more violence, for sure, in
the MacTavin novels. But I'm as meticulous as I can be about the way
I edit it—I've always preferred the Hitchcock way of cutting at the
moment of impact.
JL: Do you
think it's wise to proceed with your plan to re-issue your first
book, THE SUITING, written all those years ago? That's much darker
than your writing now.
RM: It's
still a fun book. Why disown it? Besides, I'll reissue it as “The
Perfector's Cut”, using the skills I've acquired since then to
finetune and clarify, expand. I'll also add a new original piece.
Re-owning this piece of my past is a vital step for me in owning my
new work.
JL: One
thing about you troubles me. May I...come out with both lips
blazing?
RM: Do.
But I'm demoralized that only one thing troubles you. Me, I love
having high-maintenance friends, worth every emotional penny they
cost. After all, as old Aunt Esther said--
JL: Reb,
please. I swear to Jesus, I'll be ill.
RM: I hope
not. You can't have your cake and toss your cookies, you know.
JL: Aren't
you concerned in the slightest about this madcap persona of yours?
You're a serious writer who acts like a clown. Show more respect for
your work, for Christ's sake!
RM: I show
due respect for my work, lad, any time I drop a jaw or turn an ear my
way, perhaps catching sufficient attention to inspire a beleaguered,
busy soul to download some opening pages. In a landscape that's
cluttered with more and more signs, I do whatever it takes to stand
out, proclaiming simply: Eat at Reb's.
JL: Will
you just try that someday without dressing like Ronald McDonald?
RM: I can
only quote Aunt Esther: 'Strictly stylistically speaking, sometimes I
feel like a 44D stuck in a roomful of Twiggies.'
(JL,
with enormous dignity, throws up his hands, says 'My round' to the
judges and goes back to his chair.)
ROUND FOUR
KM: Reb,
as you've said, I'm a plain speaker. I want to come straight to the
point--
RM: You
know, I lived in San Francisco—where a strayed loin was the
quickest way to get from Pant A to Pant B.
KM: That
may be. But I'm talking about points and not about pants. My
position on your work's grown stronger. Your word play really is
unique—but it gets in the way of the story.
RM: In
what way?
KM: In
what way what?
RM: In
what way does it get in the way?
KM:
Sometimes a sentence feels....loaded, you know? Like, the sentence
has more than one meaning. And every now and then I stop to wonder
WTF or to enjoy the word play. Reb, the style should be in the
background of a proper thriller. We shouldn't be aware of it. We
shouldn't even be aware that we're reading something that's been
written. I mean, we should feel smack dab in the middle of a movie
on the page.
RM: Aye,
that's one way of reading a thriller. And one way of writing one.
But—let me mention two dear dead old names—if you read a thriller
by Richard (The Manchurian Candidate) Condon or Lawrence (The First
Deadly Sin) Sanders, you'd be amazed at how wonderfully and wittily
they write.
KM: Okay.
But times have changed. And, remember, we're writing for Kindle.
RM: Too
true. But let's give readers whole worldfuls of choices, from
enjoyable quickies they read in a night to books they may play with a
couple of days.
KM: Dude,
your sales are gonna blow.
RM: That
depends on whether my instincts are right.
KM: And
what do your instincts tell you?
RM: That
there are others like myself in search of books they can, and must, and will put down repeatedly. To gather a tan in
the sun of the style. Or savor a tryst with a foxy young phrase.
KM: Still, sometimes I like your Tweets better.
(KM
goes back to his chair, certain his last quip has won him the round.)
The
panel deliberates. And it's anybody's guess who's won. The Rebster
may still have a chance—till Claude Bouchard springs from his
chair, pointing a finger at Reb.
CB: As my
Aunt Francine said, 'There's no Battle of the Sexes—just a Battle
of the Sixes, waged by men who are jealous of those blessed with
nine.”
Reb falls
to the floor, mortally wounded, it seems. The hardly-needed
countdown starts. 10...9..8..
But at 6,
Reb's fingers twitch.
And at 4,
he sits bolt upright.
And at 2,
he's on his feet.
And before
he's counted out, he roars:
“Abstinence
makes the fond grow harder!”
The
judges cheer. MacRath wins by a point.
NOTE: The
above verbal exchanges took place only in my dream. But I thank my
assailants for coming and I also thank all four for the fabulous
novels they've written.
Thursday, November 15, 2012
Ken McKea's Narrative Mischief and Magic
If you haven't discovered Ken McKea (aka Brad Strickland)'s high-powered Jim Dallas thrillers, you're in for a real treat. now's the right time to catch up. Eden Feint is the third installment of the proposed thirteen-part series, at once a tribute to the great John D. MacDonald and a fresh departure. Taken together, the first three books are like the opening movement of a rich classical score. McKea's about to shake things up, I believe, in the second movement. So start now and be prepared. Here's my Amazon review of Eden Feint:
The third in the series of Jim Dallas thrillers should signal the end of Phase One, if author Ken McKea's on point...as I suspect he is. I say this because the first three books are variations not on a theme but on a narrative tack: we don't meet the villain till very late in each book. In Atlanta Bones, we're ungraware of the villain's existence for quite some time. Cuban Dagger pulls off a magical twist on this technique by naming the villain early on...having Dallas spot him in passing--and then seeing the results of the assassin's cruel work with the knife, building up our sense of fear before the big brawl at the end...and Eden Feint? I'll avoid plot spoilers except to say that there are more than one and once again we're made to wait.
This is a wonderful, beautifully written novel with a crackerjack mystery at its core. And Dallas and his huge part-Seminole semi-pacifist friend Sam have grown into one of the great mystery teams. McKea has shown painstaking care in developing the theme of Jim Dallas's transcendence of his burn scars. The other theme, Dallas's drive for revenge--and his ticking off the days on the calendar until his wife's killers leave prison is really picking up steam here.
But: my New Year's prayer is that a second phase begins with the fourth Jim Dallas novel. In the next outing I want some serious action on the page, not off. And I need for Dallas to square off against a terrifying foe--one who's in sight from the get-go. In other words, I need the big guy to get in more serious trouble.
That said, five stars--because McKea writes wonderfully, his settings are terrific, the characters are compelling and deep...and because somewhere John D. MacDonald is smiling.
The third in the series of Jim Dallas thrillers should signal the end of Phase One, if author Ken McKea's on point...as I suspect he is. I say this because the first three books are variations not on a theme but on a narrative tack: we don't meet the villain till very late in each book. In Atlanta Bones, we're ungraware of the villain's existence for quite some time. Cuban Dagger pulls off a magical twist on this technique by naming the villain early on...having Dallas spot him in passing--and then seeing the results of the assassin's cruel work with the knife, building up our sense of fear before the big brawl at the end...and Eden Feint? I'll avoid plot spoilers except to say that there are more than one and once again we're made to wait.
This is a wonderful, beautifully written novel with a crackerjack mystery at its core. And Dallas and his huge part-Seminole semi-pacifist friend Sam have grown into one of the great mystery teams. McKea has shown painstaking care in developing the theme of Jim Dallas's transcendence of his burn scars. The other theme, Dallas's drive for revenge--and his ticking off the days on the calendar until his wife's killers leave prison is really picking up steam here.
But: my New Year's prayer is that a second phase begins with the fourth Jim Dallas novel. In the next outing I want some serious action on the page, not off. And I need for Dallas to square off against a terrifying foe--one who's in sight from the get-go. In other words, I need the big guy to get in more serious trouble.
That said, five stars--because McKea writes wonderfully, his settings are terrific, the characters are compelling and deep...and because somewhere John D. MacDonald is smiling.
Sunday, November 11, 2012
But Reb Baby, What is an Anytime Yule?
Strategy must never lag in an attempt to become a brand name. So I reviewed my branding progress...
At this point, I have four books that fall evenly into two camps: Reb's Rebel Yell Crime Tales for Bad Boys and Girls comprises SOUTHERN SCOTCH and THE ALCATRAZ CORRECTION, both starring Boss MacTavin, the very soul of Southern Scotch. The second camp I labeled Reb's Rebel Yell Yuletide Chillers, containing NOBILITY and THE VANISHING MAGIC OF SNOW.
The first camp seems effectively covered, the camp tag suggesting that these are both thrillers and wild rides. Definitely not for those who prefer cozies...but tailor-made for those who like bloody good, good bloody fun. And I regularly reinforce the Southern Scotch connection on this blog, Twitter, Facebook and my website.
The second camp tag, though, I've started to think may be selling these Yules short. When I set out, years ago, to revolutionize the Xmas book industry, I envisioned a series of short, suspenseful tales that could be read any time of the year. Not tales that just happened to be set (Die Hard, for example, or Reindeer Games), at Christmas. Not sentimental schlock that could only be read in December. No, I saw something new and different and exciting: little thrillers fusing Christmas with other holidays...while remaining top-notch reads any old day of the year.
NOBILITY commemorates Christmas and July 4th in the story of a Man Without a Country who takes on a gang of pickpockets on board the Amtrak Crescent. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B008VAGH7Q
THE VANISHING MAGIC OF SNOW celebrates both Christmas and Thanksgiving in the tale of a man who uses magic to transcend the recession that's ruined him. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B007VCCI0K
The third book in the series will fuse Christmas and April Fool's...
The camp tag, I decided, had to reinforce my binary approach. And so I've decided to change it on Amazon to "Reb's Rebel Yell Anytime Yuletide Chillers".
Fingers crossed. We grow as we go or we perish.
Hi-ho!
At this point, I have four books that fall evenly into two camps: Reb's Rebel Yell Crime Tales for Bad Boys and Girls comprises SOUTHERN SCOTCH and THE ALCATRAZ CORRECTION, both starring Boss MacTavin, the very soul of Southern Scotch. The second camp I labeled Reb's Rebel Yell Yuletide Chillers, containing NOBILITY and THE VANISHING MAGIC OF SNOW.
The first camp seems effectively covered, the camp tag suggesting that these are both thrillers and wild rides. Definitely not for those who prefer cozies...but tailor-made for those who like bloody good, good bloody fun. And I regularly reinforce the Southern Scotch connection on this blog, Twitter, Facebook and my website.
The second camp tag, though, I've started to think may be selling these Yules short. When I set out, years ago, to revolutionize the Xmas book industry, I envisioned a series of short, suspenseful tales that could be read any time of the year. Not tales that just happened to be set (Die Hard, for example, or Reindeer Games), at Christmas. Not sentimental schlock that could only be read in December. No, I saw something new and different and exciting: little thrillers fusing Christmas with other holidays...while remaining top-notch reads any old day of the year.
NOBILITY commemorates Christmas and July 4th in the story of a Man Without a Country who takes on a gang of pickpockets on board the Amtrak Crescent. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B008VAGH7Q
THE VANISHING MAGIC OF SNOW celebrates both Christmas and Thanksgiving in the tale of a man who uses magic to transcend the recession that's ruined him. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B007VCCI0K
The third book in the series will fuse Christmas and April Fool's...
The camp tag, I decided, had to reinforce my binary approach. And so I've decided to change it on Amazon to "Reb's Rebel Yell Anytime Yuletide Chillers".
Fingers crossed. We grow as we go or we perish.
Hi-ho!
Thursday, November 8, 2012
Coming Attractions
11/12: A provocative piece about my "Anytime" Yule chillers"....and why they can and should be read any ole day of the year. Including April Fool's Day, when the third one will go Live.
11/15: A review of Ken McKea's third Jim Dallas thriller, Eden Feint.
11/18: A wild and woolly Q&A with Reb MacRath himself! Not even CLAUDE BOUCHARD UNCHAINED has prepared you for this free-for-all.
11/15: A review of Ken McKea's third Jim Dallas thriller, Eden Feint.
11/18: A wild and woolly Q&A with Reb MacRath himself! Not even CLAUDE BOUCHARD UNCHAINED has prepared you for this free-for-all.
Tuesday, November 6, 2012
Getting Back to Five
Brad Strickland repeats some terrific advice on his blog http://kenmckea.blogspot.com Do three things daily to advance your writing or your work. If you think about it, that's about a thousand steps a year. Quite a bit can be accomplished if those steps are well-directed.
I plan to up the ante, though, returning to a little game I played years back, called Five. I'd had a five-year plan, in fact, and worked with daily lists of five. The trouble was, I'd stumbled on so many different fronts that my lists were too dispersed: I needed a new job in a new city, a decent apartment, good furniture and clothes, etc. I needed to get back in shape. I needed a new circle of friends. As you can imagine, five years turned into six...then seven...and then eight...and on till I stopped with the practice of five. I never stopped struggling, I never stopped writing, I never stopped sending out queries--but I abandoned the practice of Five.
Brad's inspired me to return to it...and this time to narrow my focus. Right down to the head of a pin. Five things daily, without fail, related to my writing, publishing online and starting to build more momentum. The main step, taken daily--ah, these multiples of five!--will be getting 500 words down on paper. I must also work daily at strengthening my presence on Twitter, Facebook, and various book forums, etc.
Soon I'll record a sample log for one week, either here or on Brad's blog. Brad liked the concept of Five, but suggested 3 daily writing goals and 2 daily personal goals. I like the idea of the two personal goals...but will hold fast to five for the writing. At this point in my life, 1825 steps a year appeals to me more than a thousand. And 730 personal steps may help put a still bigger smile on my mug. So, seven is heaven, though I'll call it Five.
Stay tuned for occasional updates.
I plan to up the ante, though, returning to a little game I played years back, called Five. I'd had a five-year plan, in fact, and worked with daily lists of five. The trouble was, I'd stumbled on so many different fronts that my lists were too dispersed: I needed a new job in a new city, a decent apartment, good furniture and clothes, etc. I needed to get back in shape. I needed a new circle of friends. As you can imagine, five years turned into six...then seven...and then eight...and on till I stopped with the practice of five. I never stopped struggling, I never stopped writing, I never stopped sending out queries--but I abandoned the practice of Five.
Brad's inspired me to return to it...and this time to narrow my focus. Right down to the head of a pin. Five things daily, without fail, related to my writing, publishing online and starting to build more momentum. The main step, taken daily--ah, these multiples of five!--will be getting 500 words down on paper. I must also work daily at strengthening my presence on Twitter, Facebook, and various book forums, etc.
Soon I'll record a sample log for one week, either here or on Brad's blog. Brad liked the concept of Five, but suggested 3 daily writing goals and 2 daily personal goals. I like the idea of the two personal goals...but will hold fast to five for the writing. At this point in my life, 1825 steps a year appeals to me more than a thousand. And 730 personal steps may help put a still bigger smile on my mug. So, seven is heaven, though I'll call it Five.
Stay tuned for occasional updates.
Saturday, November 3, 2012
Q&A: CLAUDE BOUCHARD UNCHAINED!
Q:
Claude, to repay you properly for the many happy hours in which
you've scared me witless, I'd like to take you to a dark place you'd
probably rather forget. Are you game?
A:
I certainly am, Reb. The question is, are you?
Q: Oh, I'm always prepared to be completely unprepared. Let's see...The year is 1997. You've spent the last two years composing a
series of thrillers you'd hoped would make your name and fortune.
Tell us of the volley of queries you sent...the number of
rejections, form, full and partial reads...and how it felt when, at
last, you surrendered.
A:
Though I’d written three novels by mid-97, the only one I’d
worked with on the query side was the series opener, Vigilante.
I’m going on memory here but it seems to me most of my querying
activity was during the first half of 1996. This was back before
email when any efforts at seeking agent representation were done via
mail with a SASE (that’s Self-Addressed-Stamped-Envelope) included.
Most agents were located in NYC and L.A., so my uncle in Burbank had
sent me a roll of U.S. stamps which weren’t readily found in
Canada. I don’t remember exactly how many queries I sent, maybe 75
or so at the rate of 2 or 3 per week to avoid too much concurrent
interest. However… Most of what I got back were rejections: some
personalized...others, form letters...and a couple of hand scribbles
directly on my query letters. I did receive three requests for
partials and one for a full but nothing came out of those in the end.
What really annoyed me were the 20-30 who never responded. Bastards
were probably in the business just for the free stamps. The
experience left me disappointed though not to any major extent. At
the time, the writing and dreaming of selling my stories was more of
a game than a career plan.
Q:
And so began a silence of twelve years. At some point, I
remember reading you were represented by an agent for a while. What
happened?
A:
Just to clarify the timeline, the agent representation happened once
I got back into writing in 2009. I had reviewed, re-edited and
self-published my three manuscripts in the spring and was working on
getting my name out via social media, particularly Twitter. As it
turned out, an editor with whom I chatted frequently was learning the
ropes to become an agent, her tutor being a childhood friend and
seasoned agent himself. When they launched the agency in December,
2009, I was offered representation along with fifteen to twenty other
writers. The relationship lasted eighteen months, after which our
agent either melted, imploded or spontaneously combusted. The
incident was not recorded so we never learned what exactly happened
to the bit--uh, lady. :)
Q:
Going back to 1997 after you wrote your third novel, did you
believe that you were quitting for keeps...or was your spirit 'taking
five'?
A:
To be honest, neither. I had written Vigilante because a
story had grown in my head and I needed to let it out. While working
on it, a sequel formed and the result was The Consultant. Mind
Games was waiting for its turn next. Once I finished the third
novel, nothing else was screaming for release. As mentioned earlier,
it’s not like I harbored a secret desire to become a bestselling
author at the time. My studies and career were in human resources
management and I considered my writing as a hobby, much like my
painting and guitar. These were leisure activities which allowed me
to express myself, nothing more.
Q:
So, twelve years of silence. At what point did you start
to feel the itch to write again? Did you jump right back into
it as if you'd never stopped...or did it take you a while to get back
in the groove?
A:
What got the itch going again is when I decided to bring my first
three novels back to the surface in April 2009. Times had changed
during those twelve years and POD suppliers suddenly made it possible
for me to see my books as books, not stacks of 8.5 X 11 inch paper.
Revising and editing those manuscripts anew slipped me back into the
sport and by the time I was done with the third, my characters were
raring to go and looking for some action. I published The Homeless
Killer less than seven weeks later.
Q:
You made a remarkably bold decision in keeping the three
completed books set in the decade you wrote them--then picking up in
the present. What can you tell us about that?
A:
When I reviewed the first three books twelve years later, I felt
they still stood up and therefore saw no need to make them more
current. I laughed when reading a recent review where the reviewer
suggested Vigilante needed updating to get away from the 90s
feel. The story took place in 1995 and, apparently, I did a decent
job of reflecting that. I could have gone ahead and set book number 4
in 1998 and kept my characters younger. However, it just made sense
to write in relatively real time as I had in the past. After all, I’d
gotten older during that twelve year period. Why should my characters
get a break by enjoying existence without aging?
Q:
Cut to the moment of truth now. The year is 2009. You've
decided to self-publish your first three books and quickly followed
up with a fourth. Were you afflicted with feelings of failure at
first? Did you have any inkling of the pot of gold in store?
A:
To be honest, my initial goal in self-publishing the first three was
to hold actual finished products in my hands. I ordered a bunch of
copies of the first edition of Vigilante which I signed and
gave to each member of my immediate family. That was my satisfaction…
Until a complete stranger bought the book… That’s when I started
seriously thinking about recreating such transactions over and over
and got busy working on promoting. Sales were dismal for a couple of
years but I never considered it as failure but rather, frustration,
learning curves and opportunities for persistence. As for the pot of
gold, I’ll let you know as soon as I find it.
Q:
You're justly famous, Claude, for your Twitter following:
about 1/3 of a million, and growing. And you've told most
if not all of your secrets online, sharing the wealth with new
talent. But what sets you apart from your rivals still more is
the pleasure that you clearly take in the social side of Twitter.
You're accessible, supportive and really seem to care. Have
you always been this way or did the long silence change you?
A:
That really is how I’ve always been and it’s no doubt part of my
upbringing. Wherever I worked throughout my corporate career, I
always ended up being a “go to guy” when someone needed a hand or
information. If I can help someone out, I’m happy to do it. Over
the years, I’ve always been grateful for any help I received when I
was stuck and I simply believe in passing it along.
Q:
What percentage of your time is spent on social media? Am
I right in thinking you enjoy that as much as the writing itself?
A:
It’s difficult to measure as it’s not a scheduled activity but
rather an ongoing, as needed, one but I’d guesstimate that
percentage to be roughly 30%. Twitter, which is my primary social
media platform, is up and running 10 to 12 hours per day while I’m
doing a number of other book related activities in addition to
tweeting. Like many jobs I’ve held in the past, I enjoy the variety
involved in being a self-published author and part of that is the
social media aspect. In a sense, it replaces the social interactions
I once had with others back in the corporate world.
Q:
Productive though you are, you don't seem to be in a hurry.
What's the dream scenario of your production schedule?
A:
I’m not in a hurry and there is no scenario dreaming
involved in my production schedule. I start writing a book when I do
and finish at the end. I don’t map out my stories so establishing
timetables or deadlines doesn’t make sense to me. I write when it’s
time, sometimes thousands of words in a day, sometimes hundreds, some
days not at all. If I get something done quickly, it gets out sooner; if not, I release it later.
Q:
Please define your ideal reader.
A:
This was an interesting question which required much thought and
consideration in order to come up with an appropriate answer. Having
carefully weighed all applicable factors, I’d have to say my ideal
reader is anyone who loves my books.
Q:
What are the narrative values you cherish the most as a writer?
A:
Writing is an art form and art, among other definitions, is a method
of expression. Where an artist recounts his story with hues and
shapes or a musician organizes notes and tempo to share her auditory
tale, a writer composes his vision with narrative. Although I’m an
artist and musician as well, my preferred mode of expression is
writing as I find it offers the most extensive palette, allowing me
to create not only an image or a moment but rather, a continuous flow
of sights, sounds, movement, thoughts and behaviors which, combined,
meld into a story. I was recently asked, “How did you learn to
write scenes?” to which I replied, “The best way I can describe
how I write scenes is that I visualize them as I'm writing (kind of
like a movie playing in my head) and then describe what I'm seeing.”
Though I could produce a reasonable portrayal of a scene with paint
and brush, it would never have the dimension made possible with
narrative.
Q:
How close do you feel to producing the best of all Claude
Bouchard books--and what would set it apart from the rest?
Another interesting question, Reb, which brings to mind a WIP I currently
have simmering in the background. I started writing The Last
Party, a stand-alone, in February this year and this is one which
I am definitely taking my time with. It requires a great deal of
research and the storyline is intricate with a number of distinct but
related sub-plots. I won’t go into detail for now but I envision a
work which, in the end, will highlight how little humankind is, both
physically in relation to the planet and nature as well as in mindset
in terms of pettiness and selfishness. Once it’s complete, it
should rock.
Q:
Do you feel more blessed or rewarded--or both?
A:
I’m blessed for all I have which matters, meaning health, family,
love and friends. I’m rewarded for my efforts. It’s all good.
Q:
Which famous historical figures might you have liked to have
been?
A:
A difficult question to answer with so many great folks to choose
from but I’ve narrowed it down to two. It would be either Benjamin
Franklin, because he was highly talented, intelligent and versatile,
as demonstrated by his accomplishments as a statesman, diplomat,
inventor, writer and scientist or Karl Marx because growing up with
Groucho, Harpo and Chico had to be a riot.
Q:
Of your two protagonists, it would be safer to say that you
relate to lawman Dave. But...Chris Barry shares you initials. Do
tell...
A:
I actually relate to Dave and Chris equally well as they both remind
me of myself to some extent. We all share a very similar sense of
humor and way of thinking. When I think about it, it’s actually
somewhat strange how alike we are in many aspects. In regards to the
initials, Chris went on with that for a while, particularly when I
got onto Twitter as ceebee308. He kept teasing with how I liked him
better than Dave. Crazy guys, I tell you.
Q:
Looking back, can you see any ways that your life was enriched
by that silence?
A:
I have to admit, I don’t tend to look back very much. What’s
done is done and we can’t change the past. However, to answer your
question, I wouldn’t say the silence is what enriched my life as
much as writing my first three novels before my twelve year hiatus. I
can’t say for sure but I don’t know if I would have suddenly
decided to write novels in 2009 if I hadn’t had that three book
foundation already in place. What I do know for sure is I’m damned
pleased I did write them at the time.
Q:
What's the baddest and best about the man Bouchard?
A:
Baddest: Putting it lightly, I frown when I’m annoyed.
Best: I respect anyone who deserves it.
Q:
Can you let a whisker or two of the cat out of the bag about
your future books?
A:
I’m currently working on Femme Fatale, the seventh in the
Vigilante series. It’s based in Paris and though past
central characters are present, it features Leslie Robb, who made her
first appearance two books earlier in 6 Hours 42 Minutes and
was then quite present in Discreet Activities. I’m not sure
exactly when it will be finished but it could release before the New
Year. As mentioned earlier, The Last Party will eventually see
the day but only when it’s good and ready.
Friday, November 2, 2012
Reb's Yule Extravaganza & The 7 Magic Questions
I've had a great year, seeing four of my books appear Live on Kindle after those years in The Desert. Enough about me, though. Let's talk about you. With so many authors to choose from and so little time to read, it's hard to know where to begin.
Start right here, with a short list of questions to help you decide:
1) Does the cover grab you, suggesting something different and colorful and fun? Good question. Nothing shallow about judging a book by its cover.
2) Does the title catch your eye, suggesting not only the theme or the hook but a hint of the tone or the style?
3) Do the sample pages ring your bells? Does the author command your attention or beg like a pooch for your dough? Is the prose clean and quick and compelling?
4) Do the author's credentials impress you at all? Ten years to mastery, they say. Where did the author go to school? What does he or she bring to the table in terms of an apprenticeship--experience as an editor or journalist, etc.? Other publishing credentials?
5) What about the reviews? Do they all sound like party favors from family and friends...or have some of the reviews come from writers you know and admire?
6) Has the author made any effort to bond with readers as people, not just as possible sales? What is the ratio of warm Hellos to strident Buy Me's on Twitter?
7) Finally, how about the price? Do you feel the author is picking your pocket or giving you a handshake in the form of a price that says Give me a try?
Ladies and gentlemen, vote for MacRath. If elected, I'll give you two Sundays a week and bring Free Love back to the mainstream.
Start right here, with a short list of questions to help you decide:
1) Does the cover grab you, suggesting something different and colorful and fun? Good question. Nothing shallow about judging a book by its cover.
2) Does the title catch your eye, suggesting not only the theme or the hook but a hint of the tone or the style?
3) Do the sample pages ring your bells? Does the author command your attention or beg like a pooch for your dough? Is the prose clean and quick and compelling?
4) Do the author's credentials impress you at all? Ten years to mastery, they say. Where did the author go to school? What does he or she bring to the table in terms of an apprenticeship--experience as an editor or journalist, etc.? Other publishing credentials?
5) What about the reviews? Do they all sound like party favors from family and friends...or have some of the reviews come from writers you know and admire?
6) Has the author made any effort to bond with readers as people, not just as possible sales? What is the ratio of warm Hellos to strident Buy Me's on Twitter?
7) Finally, how about the price? Do you feel the author is picking your pocket or giving you a handshake in the form of a price that says Give me a try?
Ladies and gentlemen, vote for MacRath. If elected, I'll give you two Sundays a week and bring Free Love back to the mainstream.
Thursday, November 1, 2012
CLAUDE BOUCHARD UNCHAINED is coming!
Claude has sent back his answers for the November Q&A. The final version will appear here on Saturday, November 3.
Trust me when I tell you this: Claude's in rare form and you don't want to miss out!
Trust me when I tell you this: Claude's in rare form and you don't want to miss out!
Saturday, October 27, 2012
The Alcatraz Correction: The First Person-Plus
Have you written an I or a S/He book? And which do you prefer to read?
Some time ago, Gore Vidal predicted that more and more novels would be written in the first person. Why? Because writers, mistakenly, believe that this p.o.v. is easier to write--requiring less description and talent for prose. And because, as readers, we enjoy the warm, instant connection. Now, Vidal was a bit of a Sly Boots, for some of his own best work was told in the first person, providing him the benefits he'd had such fun condemning. And, despite his pedophila, Lolita's Humbert Humbert wins us over while turning our stomachs because of his witty and engaging tone.
But the first person p.o.v. isn't nearly as easy to write as a gifted writer may make it appear. Because we're spared--or should be spared--many pages of purple prose settings (When you keep a diary or a log, do you wax over-poetic about the great McCotter trees, grown from seed imported from Southern Caledonia in 1668 by Esmerelda Squanchez?), we need swift suggestions of setting...and superbly tended interior landscaping. Above all, we need both a writer and a hero with an interesting mind. This can't be faked. Take enough time to compare as little as five pages by a couch-bound geek from Podunk with those by a well-traveled, adventuresome soul wielding a pen that was warmed up in hell. And in that light you'll feel the difference in your blood and bones. First person genre masters: John D. Macdonald, Raymond Chandler, James Lee Burke, Robert B Parker, Brad Strickland/Ken McKea...
Some favor the third person limited, with alternating p.o.v.'s, because of its obvious advantage: Readers can see what the hero cannot: the beast lying in wait on the door's other side...In novel after novel, James Patterson shifts back and forth between two p.o.v.'s: that of his latest sicko and endangered hero. The formula works.
And yet I wondered for decades: How could I keep the intimacy of the classic first-person narrative and respect its built-in limits...while milking the suspense of the mixed p.o.v.? I repeat: first-person all the way, told by just one narrator--but raiding the great benefits of the mixed p.o.v.
THE ALCATRAZ CORRECTION brings something new to the table:
The First Person-Plus.
And the difference, I think, will surprise and delight.
Some time ago, Gore Vidal predicted that more and more novels would be written in the first person. Why? Because writers, mistakenly, believe that this p.o.v. is easier to write--requiring less description and talent for prose. And because, as readers, we enjoy the warm, instant connection. Now, Vidal was a bit of a Sly Boots, for some of his own best work was told in the first person, providing him the benefits he'd had such fun condemning. And, despite his pedophila, Lolita's Humbert Humbert wins us over while turning our stomachs because of his witty and engaging tone.
But the first person p.o.v. isn't nearly as easy to write as a gifted writer may make it appear. Because we're spared--or should be spared--many pages of purple prose settings (When you keep a diary or a log, do you wax over-poetic about the great McCotter trees, grown from seed imported from Southern Caledonia in 1668 by Esmerelda Squanchez?), we need swift suggestions of setting...and superbly tended interior landscaping. Above all, we need both a writer and a hero with an interesting mind. This can't be faked. Take enough time to compare as little as five pages by a couch-bound geek from Podunk with those by a well-traveled, adventuresome soul wielding a pen that was warmed up in hell. And in that light you'll feel the difference in your blood and bones. First person genre masters: John D. Macdonald, Raymond Chandler, James Lee Burke, Robert B Parker, Brad Strickland/Ken McKea...
Some favor the third person limited, with alternating p.o.v.'s, because of its obvious advantage: Readers can see what the hero cannot: the beast lying in wait on the door's other side...In novel after novel, James Patterson shifts back and forth between two p.o.v.'s: that of his latest sicko and endangered hero. The formula works.
And yet I wondered for decades: How could I keep the intimacy of the classic first-person narrative and respect its built-in limits...while milking the suspense of the mixed p.o.v.? I repeat: first-person all the way, told by just one narrator--but raiding the great benefits of the mixed p.o.v.
THE ALCATRAZ CORRECTION brings something new to the table:
The First Person-Plus.
And the difference, I think, will surprise and delight.
Saturday, October 20, 2012
Brad Strickland Q&A: The Doc is In & Smokin' Hot!
Q:
How does it feel to be an 'overnight success' as a new mystery
writer...after publishing 70 novels in the past 25 years?
It’s
been a long road. When I first thought about being a writer, I went
immediately for the mystery field. At sixteen, I wrote my first short
story, “The Third Grave,” and almost immediately sold it to
Ellery Queen’s Mystery Magazine. That was also the last time
I sold to them! I got busy with college, with starting a teaching
career, and so on and drifted away from writing for years. And then
when I came back, I wrote fantasy and sf, and other things came
along, too. So if I’m an overnight success, I must have overslept.
Q:
You wrote a lot of fantasy and science fiction, and also before you
got back to the mystery field, you published in many other genres,
correct?
Yes.
Years after that first story, influenced by friends who were in the
sf and fantasy field, I wrote and sold short stories to sf/fantasy
magazines. That led to Richard Curtis, the agent, contacting me to
ask if I could write an sf novel.
You
never say “no.” So I said sure, I’m working on one right now.
He asked me to send it to him when I finished, and six months later I
did. He sold that one (To Stand Beneath the Sun) and that got
me started as a novelist. Since then I’ve written science fiction,
fantasy, horror, historicals, and tons of YA books.
Q:
Is there an advantage for a writer to work in so many different
fields? Is that something you might advise younger writers to try?
Actually,
it may have been my worst mistake. Richard Curtis always said that if
I do ONE damn thing I might make a name for myself, but I tended to
write the story that came to mind, so I wrote fantasy, horror, sf, a
mystery, you name it. The result was that I landed firmly in the
midlist and stuck there! And when John Bellairs died and his son
Frank asked me to finish up some books in his father’s series, that
cemented me as a YA writer for a long time.
Q:
And you also wrote for that TV dog that liked to dress up in
costumes.
Sure,
Wishbone the Jack Russell terrier. Those were fun to write, but my
gosh, they wanted a ton of them. Eventually I co-wrote a good many
Wishbone books with Thomas E. Fuller, with whom I worked on radio
scripts for the Atlanta Radio Theatre Company, and also with Barbara.
Through
it all I still loved mysteries. When I was in college I corresponded
regularly with Fred Dannay, half of the Ellery Queen writing team—a
wonderful, encouraging guy—and also with Ken Millar, who wrote as
Ross MacDonald. Our letters were often about the art and craft of
mystery writing, and without being formal teachers, they gave me a
great deal of instruction in the form.
Q:
Tell us how you came back to the mystery field after all those other
books.
Before
Jim Dallas, I launched another collaboration, this one with my
daughter Amy, a theater person—we created “Bailey Macdonald”
(see the homage?) as a pen name for YA mysteries that call in a
historical character—as a youth—to act as detective. The first of
those was Wicked Will, in which a twelve-year-old Will
Shakespeare solves a murder; the second, The Secret of the Sealed
Room (I had a better title, but the publisher didn’t like it)
does something similar with a teen-aged Ben Franklin. We have plans
for one with a young Sam Clemens, but for some reason my daughter got
married recently, so that one’s on hold! But before starting those,
Thomas Fuller and I planned and even wrote in the adult mystery
field. We had come up with the germ of Jim Dallas back around 2000.
Q:
You'd intended a series of novels inspired by Travis McGee, right?
Yes,
Tom and I had already published one mystery, a kind of romantic cozy,
called The Ghost Finds a Body, very much in the classic
amateur-sleuth mold. It was set in Florida, a place both Tom and I
liked a lot. While we were working on a completely different
project—an ARTC radio production—we were taking a break and Tom
said, “Dammit, I want to read a new Travis McGee!”
I
pointed out that, John D. MacDonald having died a few years earlier,
that was not likely to happen. But Tom asked, “What if we wrote a
tribute novel, one that isn’t a McGee but is in the same mold?” I
was willing if he was, and he came up with the germ of the idea (I
won’t spoil it), the odd fact that would make the mystery possible.
Q:
How did you two collaborate? How’d you divide the work on the Jim
Dallas book?
With
Atlanta Bones, I suggested “Dallas” as the name for the
character, since it is pretty widely known that MacDonald’s
original name for his beach-bum adventurer was Dallas McGee.
Unfortunately, his proposal landed on his editor’s desk on November
22, 1963. “Dallas” was, at that historical moment, a bad choice.
But today the curse is off it. Originally our man was just going to
be Dallas, no other name (like MacDonald’s Meyer), but that got to
be awkward, so one day Tom said, “He’s Jim,” and that was that.
Tom
and I met and plotted out the novel pretty thoroughly, about fifteen
double-spaced pages or so, and we laid out the kind of research we’d
need to do. We took a run at writing a few chapters, six as I recall,
three by me and three by Tom—we did alternate chapters. To
distinguish these from Travis, we decided they’d be third-person.
That didn’t work, and we decided that we’d need to go
first-person instead. But at that moment we sold two YA series and
got really busy working on them, so we tabled the novel. That’s
where matters rested when Tom died of a sudden heart attack in
November, 2002.
Not
at all. By this time in our careers, we were identified as a YA team,
and so we decided we’d do the Dallas novel under a pen name—not
to hide our identities, but to brand them as PG-13! Tom suggested a
“Mac” name to reference both McGee and MacDonald, and our first
thought was McKee, but that seemed too heavy-handed and obvious. Then
McKay. I came up with Ken as a tip of the hat to the OTHER MacDonald,
Ken Millar. Trouble was, we discovered a whole host of Ken McKays. So
we thought we’d spell it weird: McKea (pronounced McKay).
Q:
Were you tempted to abort the novel with Tom’s death?
Oh,
yes. Tom died intestate, so there were legal issues as well as the
shock of losing a close friend. However, the Atlanta Radio Theatre
Company began work in 2010 on recording The Dancer in the Dark,
a Lovecraftian horror tale that Tom had written as a
two-and-a-half-hour radio serial, and I was cast in it.
That
reminded me that Tom had a very rough draft of a novel version of the
story that we had planned to work on together. I dug that out,
completed it, and published it as an ebook. That in turn led me to
look at the groundwork we’d laid for Atlanta Bones, and I
still liked the idea, so I began from scratch to write the novel from
the outline plans.
Q:
Once you'd decided to go on, was there any change in your thinking
about the nature of the series? As I went on from the first book to
the second, I found myself thinking: Here's a tribute that knows
when to go its own way.
The
first idea was a one-off homage. I think we put maybe too much
backstory in Atlanta Bones because of that. But, doggone it, I
grew to like the character so much that I figured there must be more
stories to tell.
There’s
a lot of Tom and me in the characters, you know. Physically, Sam
Lyons is a lot like Tom—tall and bulky. He wears my Hawaiian
shirts, though. The byplay is a lot like discussions Tom and I would
have.
Detour
for a story: Tom and I were on the way to a meeting of our writers’
group one Sunday. It was in Atlanta, south of our homes, but since I
lived farther north than Tom, usually I’d stop by his house and
pick him up and we’d drive down together.
This
Sunday we had to pull over. Coming toward us in the other lane was a
police car with a flashing light; behind it was a hearse. Behind that
was one car. That was the entire procession. I said to Tom, “Nothing
in the world looks sadder than a clown’s funeral.”
He
didn’t react. Then, an hour later, in the middle of the meeting,
Tom suddenly roared with laughter and yelled, “Because they’re
all in the same car!” Everyone thought he’d lost his mind.
That
kind of joking around shows up in the books and it always reminds me
of talking with Tom.
Okay,
physically Jim Dallas is . . . not me. Not Tom, either. Kind of an
ideal man of action, but damaged both physically and psychically.
Anyway,
with the two strong characters as a grounding, I thought there were
many more stories to tell. Before I had finished Atlanta Bones, I
had come up with two more ideas, and with a little ingenuity I found
a title pattern. MacDonald’s McGee was color-coded: The Deep
Blue Goodbye, A Purple Place for Dying, Cinnamon Skin, and so on.
Instead of that, I decided that each book would have an alphabetical
title: Atlanta Bones, Cuban Dagger, Eden Feint, Glades Heist….so
I could do thirteen books, until I get to Washington Xray and
the Y-Z one, which I know but which I’m saving. I can see a
character arc for Jim now and I think it’s sustainable.
Q:
What does Jim Dallas bring to the table that's new and refreshing
and different?
I
see him as a man struggling with despair. He is not by nature
pessimistic. He has a great sense of humor and a real interest in
life. But life has damaged him and has made him bitter and cynical in
ways he’s aware of and doesn’t like. He’s solving his own
mystery, in a way, through the books, trying to find his way back to
a point of balance and evenness in his own life.
Jim’s
obsession—and he is compulsive—can be taken off his own problems
by the intricate details of the cases he discovers and works on, but
that’s at best temporary, leaving him antsy and disturbed between
cases. Sam Lyons senses his potential for violence and destruction,
but also senses that he is salvageable, and so he does what a friend
can to help Jim deal with the explosive matters in his own past and
his own psyche.
So
I think the new element here is actually a very old one: the
detective ultimately detecting himself. Oedipus the King is a
detective story in which the detective is simultaneously the murderer
he is pursuing, without realizing it. That can be incredibly
powerful. That’s what I’m driving at right now in the series.
Q:
Had you always planned on doing this as a limited, thirteen-part
series? An inspired idea, by the way—the doubled-up alphabetized
titles: Atlanta Bones, Cuban Dagger, Eden Feint...!
Well,
you never know! You launch out on a series, maybe people hate it, and
it dies. But I do see a clear character arc for the thirteen books.
After that…I don’t know. Maybe, depending on how Y-Z turns out,
there could be further adventures. At the moment, I’m concentrating
on lucky thirteen, though!
Q:
A fair number of writers, including myself, have switched from
traditional to ebook publishing. You're one of the handful who work
on both sides. Though you've been with the same agent for decades,
he can't handle all your work...and has turned down a few precious
projects, I think. You've written them, regardless. What have we
here? A commercial, genre writer who writes what he will, from the
heart?
The
market is dismal at the moment. Traditional publishers don’t know
how to deal with ebooks, but they need to learn, and damn fast.
Really, what’s the point of bringing out a hardcover priced at
$28.00, a paperback version priced at $7.99, and an ebook priced
at…$14.00? That deters readers.
The
midlist author is right now persona non grata as far as most
traditional houses go. They want guaranteed best-selling writers, so
we have pop stars getting six-million-dollar book deals, while
talented writers can’t break in. That’s a shame, and it’s no
wonder that writers are turning to independent publishing.
As
for me, I want to write what I’d like to read. That’s why I never
settled on a genre—an idea comes up and I want to follow it down
the rabbit hole, and whether the hole leads to sf, fantasy,
historicals, or mysteries, I want to go along on the trip.
And
like all writers, I want readers, people to go with me.
Q:
How goes life in EbookLandia? Have you succeeded in learning
everything you need to know but hoped you'd never have to ask?
Getting
there, not there yet. I’ve become pretty good at formatting for
ebooks, and I design my own covers. The costs are minimal—you
really have to have an ISBN, and they’re $125.00 each if you buy
them one at a time, and you really need to register your own
copyright, which is a further $35.00. Earning that back is a big
milestone! Fortunately, ebooks have a higher royalty rate than paper
books, and that helps get you to the break-even point (which, by the
way, I passed fairly quickly with both the Dallas novels now out).
I’m not getting rich, but I like to see the sales mount up. They
provide some validation—“Somebody actually is willing to pay to
read my story.”
I’m
already getting emails asking why the books aren’t in paper. The
answer is that no publisher apparently wants them. It’s barely
possible that will change as the series goes on, but if it does, I
intend to hang onto the ebook rights because I enjoy the process of
controlling the book so much.
Which
is not to say that I don’t need editors. Fortunately my wife
Barbara has a good eye for a syntactical faux pas or a plot
hole, and the members of my writers’ group backstop me on story
logic and character and so on. Honestly I think at this stage the
ebooks are as well-edited as most of my paper books have been.
But
I am still learning. Actually, that’s a good thing. I can honestly
say that I have learned something new with every story, every book I
have ever written, and that keeps the process lively for me.
Q:
What handicaps do you have to fight to succeed as an indie writer?
There’s
the kneejerk response, of course: “If it was any good, it would be
in hardcover.” I think that prejudice will fade over time. Right
now ebook sales are outstripping traditional book sales.
On
the other hand, there’s a lot of drek out there! It’s hard to
carve a niche in a field where the really bad stuff, the stuff that
doesn’t cut it on any level, outnumbers the good so decisively.
That’s always true, though—Sturgeon’s Law in science fiction is
“Ninety percent of everything is crap.” So you have to learn to
trust the readers to find you and to make up their minds. If they
like you, it would be nice if they’d tell five other people to buy
the book!
With
self-publishing in the traditional sense, distribution is the big
problem. With ebooks, it’s publicity, letting people know the story
is there and that it’s worth reading.
Q:
What company would you like your work to keep on discriminating
readers' shelves?
As
a mystery writer, I’d love to see my stuff up there with all my
idols: Ellery Queen, Rex Stout, Ross MacDonald, John D. MacDonald.
They are the ones I began to read before I was even a teen-ager and
the ones whose stories linger in the mind. And there are writers in
other fields who touch on mysteries now and then that I’d be
honored to keep company with: Ray Bradbury, Isaac Asimov, and my
long-time favorite writer, Robert Louis Stevenson. Among the ladies,
Connie Willis, Dorothy Sayers, and Sue Grafton—who like me was
inspired by Ken Millar to become a writer. And of course as you know
I like your character Boss MacTavin, a hardboiled guy in a whole
nother way from Dallas, but a hell of an interesting figure!
Q:
What books can we expect from you besides more Jim Dallas thrillers?
My
next paper book is a biography of Eddie Carroll, the most well-known
actor that no one’s ever heard of. He was the voice of Disney’s
Jiminy Cricket for 37 years. Wonderful guy with wonderful stories,
and his widow Carolyn and I have co-written his bio. That one’s
coming out early next year and is in the editing stage now.
One
of these days, Sam Clemens, Detective. And Tom and I had a
steampunk novel underway, The Empress of Time, that I think
has real potential. A publisher has expressed interest in my writing
another show-business biography. And—well, that’s probably enough
to be getting on with!
Q:
You've worn a lot of hats, Brad, and worn them very well: Professor
(full title—where), son, husband, father, author of
horror/sci-fi/fantasy/nonfiction/mystery...Which hats remain for you
to wear—and which do you most yearn to wear?
Professor
of English at the University of North Georgia (formerly Gainesville
State College)
I’d
like to be a grandpa one of these days! And I’ve always wanted to
be…a lumberjack!
No,
actually I love the sea and ships and boats, and though I don’t
want the aggravation and expense of actually owning one, I’d really
like to learn how to sail a sailboat one of these days.
Q:
Do you close the bathroom door when you're home alone?
I
do, because I hate peeing on my dog’s head. And it’s hard to
avoid because he wants to look in there and see what’s happening.
Q:
What's one thing about you that drives people nuts?
Barbara
says I lie a lot—not maliciously, but I’ll start telling a story
and if she doesn’t seem to be paying attention, I’ll keep
embroidering it until it breaks down of its own weight. My kids say I
shouldn’t sing in the car because my voice can cause sterility.
Q:
Do you have any strength as a writer that some consider weakness?
When Ovid's friends listed three lines of his work that they felt
were too 'clever' to keep, those were the same three lines he swore
he'd die before he changed. And Byron's friends begged him to abandon
his work on Don Juan.
Some
readers think I over-analyze now and again and explain things in too
much detail—but I’ve learned that unless I do put some effort
into it people tend to misread the story and get the wrong idea! So I
suppose it’s a case of trying to balance clarity and leaving room
for the readers’ imaginations.
Q:
Has your adult fiction benefited from your efforts in YA?
Just
the practice of storytelling helps, of course. In YA I’ve
fortunately had a great deal of freedom. When I did the Wishbone
adaptation of Treasure Island, I told the editor, Kevin Ryan,
that every young-reader adaptation I’d ever seen soft-pedaled the
story by omitting the onstage deaths of both good and bad guys, and I
told him that in my version them what died in the original would
similar die in the Wishbone version, by the Powers! And he let me do
that. After all, pirates are not nice people. The line editor said
that young readers wouldn’t understand Trelawney’s line,
“Hawkins, I put prodigious faith in you!” but he let me keep
“prodigious” in. I think kids get it—from context if from
nothing else—and so both in style and substance I treasured the
freedom I have had in writing for a younger audience. Traditional YA
mysteries don’t kill anyone—but in my YA murder mysteries,
murders are real, and kids help to solve them.
Q:
Are you the guy who sits at the end of the bar secretively taking
notes...or the wild party animal who jumps right into the action and
hopes to remember it later?
More
the quiet guy. At parties I talk with friends and strangers and don’t
drink much. One thing I have to do with the Jim Dallas tales is to
get connoisseurs to tell me what beers, wines, and liquors he would
buy. Dallas didn’t start out as a man devoted to high living, but
one way he copes is to make his existence as pleasant as possible, so
he tends to seek out good beverages and good food. He’s not saving
up for the future, so his simple life is spiced by a bit of
indulgence (which he pays for with a rigorous exercise routine).
Me,
a beer is usually all I want, just one. Not fussy about it. I
actually have more fun watching, listening, and mentally filing
things away than by trying to be a party animal. You get the seeds of
stories by people watching. The fun is seeing what they grow into.
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